Favorite Dialogues – 2

August 1st, 2008 · No Comments

From Sleeping Fires, by George Gissing

In this passage, middle-aged Langley seeks permission from eighteen-year-old Louis’s guardian, Lady Revill, to take the boy under his wing and help guide him through the shoals of youthful adventuring. Lady Revill is a former lover of Langley with whom he has only recently reconnected, after a twenty-year separation. She knows of Langley’s true relationship with young Louis, that Langley is his father – a fact of which Langley has not yet been apprised. Here’s the dialogue: (more…)

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Writing Dialogue

August 31st, 2007 · No Comments

It helps to think of dialogue as just ordinary conversation – that has a purpose. Monologue is a conversation one has with oneself. Dialogue is a conversation one has with someone else. There are always at leat two people involved in a dialogue.

Your task as a writer is, through the voices having the conversation, to allow your readers to glean more about the characters, their relationships, and their intentions. Sometimes you can also use dialogue to move the action forward, or to reveal something by ‘showing not telling.’

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