WriteSpa #49 – Getting to the Essence

WriteSpa – An Oasis for Writers

Every few years I play this game with myself: If I were on a deserted island, and could have with me only twelve objects for the rest of my life, what would they be?

FAQ:

No, no one else is around and unlikely that they will be.

Food and drink are not necessary – essential nourishment is supplied. (But you might choose a cup from which to drink the fresh water from the spring, if that matters to you.)

No electricity or other energy – so leave your laptop and car at home. They won’t work. […]

WriteSpa #48 – Great Dialog Part 3/3

WriteSpa – An Oasis for Writers

Just as in life itself, there are three key components to every story, no matter how short or long, or simple or complex: People. Space. Time. In other words, characters, situations, events. For a story to work well, all three of these have to connect with each other in a relevant way. If you include an event that has nothing to do with the story, it is obviously disposable. The same with dialog: Wherever you include dialog, it has to be relevant to the unfolding of the story. If it’s not relevant, cut it out.

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